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• The Curse of the Curls

  (#) riaryder 2007-03-10

  Hurray for Kyle showing her soft side and forgetting to be a teenager for all of a thousand words there. I'm sure Wiggie is a good influence on her ;-)

• The Curse of the Curls

  (#) whatkatydid 2007-03-10

  /you just had to pay attention to Dad's steady horizontal growth and Mom's face gradually losing the battle against time to figure out the correct chronology.
  / OMG, that was officially the best descriptive sentence I've read....END OF.
  
  I loved this chapter, if had Wiggie in it, so I was a little freaked out but I'm dealing with it. Then there was Patrick and Sheena thing. That was awesome, authentic, realistic, romantic, moving and all this other bunch of stuff that I can't get out because I used all my good stuff in the journal.
  
  xx
  
  Great writer. Seriously.

• The Curse of the Curls

  (#) jessiearei 2007-03-10

  aww! yay! Patricks seems like he's forgiving her! I'm happy now! haha you made my day!
  I'm sick today. it sucks!
  haha great update as usual!

• The Curse of the Curls

  (#) luckysgc921 2007-03-10

  swoon
  ...then some more swooning for good measure.
  words can not describe how badly i want to see patrick trying to feed a baby. sometimes tells me it may just be the cutest thing EVER.
  i loved this chapter. a lot. lot. lot.
  and I even liked Kylene. (I can't type Kyle cause i Heart kyle too much to imply i don't like her)
  will be sad when this ends. :(

• The Curse of the Curls

  (#) MMMramen 2007-03-10

  Somehow, through her selflessness and maturity, Kyle still manages to be self-absorbed and silly. Good work. I expect nothing less. It seems like Patrick and Sheena will be OK. Oh and the subtitles for Wiggie were quite appreciated. I can't make my brain understand her. And I was finally able to give you a point. Yay for me?

• The Curse of the Curls

  (#) pinkkissypetefreak 2007-03-10

  haha. "privates". that was a great chapter. shame it's already coming to a close, this fic. sighs

• The Curse of the Curls

  (#) melrevolution 2007-03-10

  Haha you're great!
  Is it bad that i understood what Wiggie was saying?

• The Curse of the Curls

  (#) Amaranthea 2007-03-10

  Kyle actually did something nice for her parents, even if it was for her own comfort. Well, that's a teenager, I suppose. Glad to see that Patrick's pudgy little heart melted a bit...

• The Curse of the Curls

  (#) LOVELA 2007-03-10

  Superb! I love the interaction between Patrick and Sheena. It was very realistic and wonderful!
  I know I probably won't be able to give you a point since I'm slow, but I can give you this: SMOOCHES!

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