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A Trail of Surprises

by Saori31 1 Reviews

A different look at Touya Akira's life. One shot.

Category: Hikaru no Go - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Romance - Characters: Akira - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2005/09/24 - Updated: 2005/09/24 - 9772 words

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  • A Trail of Surprises

    (#) smallsmiles 2010-12-03 05:29:09 PM

    I'm not sure what to make of this...on one hand, it is pretty memorable.

    but I think this is highly due to the unusual mix of inappropriate signals from the girl-character... I think this is not a good message to send to young girls-- we don't need to be female supporters only, and it's inappropriate for anyone (male or female) to manipulate young kids feelings in a romantic way-- but I expect that was not really thought out. It seems to me that she is indeed sexually abusing Akira, so I don't really approve of the message at all.

    The writing style itself, there's nothing wrong with it. :) Just highly consider the kind of message you want to give to your audience when considering your characters.

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