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Chapter Two

by Lissa 3 Reviews

The last stand, after the last battle. Four students choose freedom. Twoshot.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: G - Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama - Characters: Dobby, Dumbledore, Ginny, Harry, Hermione, Luna, Neville, Percy, Ron - Warnings: [!] [?] - Published: 2007/03/12 - Updated: 2007/03/12 - 1328 words


  • Regrets

    (#) banner 2007-03-12 09:01:30 PM

    ... and no regrets.
    Well done, nice and satisfying ending.

    Author's response

    Thank you for the review!
  • Regrets

    (#) thomaswatts 2007-03-12 10:44:11 PM

    Great outline. Now write the rest of the story.

    Author's response

    I really should get back to writing LoH, but a new idea is beginning to hatch--sort of an alternate ending. But I think I'll leave the rest of the story as it is--I've always thought that stories like this that were expanded too much became kind of tedious.
  • Regrets

    (#) Cateagle 2007-03-14 05:19:43 PM

    An interesting "two-off" and a good short story. I like the way they gave everyone the slip and managed to avoid trouble and being managed.

    Author's response

    It isn't a completely original idea, but I thought I'd try it anyway. Thanks for the review.

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