by Lissa
3 Reviews The last stand, after the last battle. Four students choose freedom. Twoshot.
Category: Harry Potter -
Rating: G - Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama - Characters: Dobby, Dumbledore, Ginny, Harry, Hermione, Luna, Neville, Percy, Ron -
Warnings: [!] [?] - Published: 2007/03/12 - Updated: 2007/03/12 - 1328 words
Reviews
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(#) banner 2007-03-12 09:01:30 PM
... and no regrets.
Well done, nice and satisfying ending.
Author's response
Thank you for the review!
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(#) thomaswatts 2007-03-12 10:44:11 PM
Great outline. Now write the rest of the story.
Author's response
I really should get back to writing LoH, but a new idea is beginning to hatch--sort of an alternate ending. But I think I'll leave the rest of the story as it is--I've always thought that stories like this that were expanded too much became kind of tedious.
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(#) Cateagle 2007-03-14 05:19:43 PM
An interesting "two-off" and a good short story. I like the way they gave everyone the slip and managed to avoid trouble and being managed.
Author's response
It isn't a completely original idea, but I thought I'd try it anyway. Thanks for the review.