Brendon and Desi on the beach.
i love the snappy lines in this. they both have attitude and it's fantastic to read. loving it so far, keep it coming. i need more. =]
(#) trueLIEx3 2007-03-13 04:07:52 PM
Eeep! This is SO adorable! I love it! MORE SOON!
(#) kristina1 2007-03-13 05:19:08 PM
Love it keep going!!!!
(#) sing4me09 2007-03-14 02:44:25 PM
hope that's soon!
(#) Lina 2007-03-15 09:05:35 AM
Dude this is amazing. Your really pretty too. Nice jacket, I'll totally know you had it first from now on though. It's awesome you got to go to a Dresden Dolls concert while Panic! was with them. Lucky. Anyways, definitely keep this up. I'd like to see where it goes.
(#) meeniemoe 2007-03-16 05:20:18 PM
Woohoo! I just finished reading these...three chapters...xD And it's really REALLY good. Besides the few spelling/grammatical errors, (you don't have to go back and change it, but I'm just pointing it out.) the plot is very original and your characters (or should I say character?) is incredibly believable. I like it! Continue, please. =)
(#) Geets 2007-03-17 01:28:54 PM
man, this is excellent!! chapter 2 was fab, with brendon, :D , it was just so good! next time? i hope next time is soon!!!
Firstly, this has to the best reason for writing a story ever. Inspiration strikes from the most random of places :-)
Secondly, it's really good. Nicely written. Nice work