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Toppled

by yugihfan 2 Reviews

What does the champion think after you beat him in the games?

Category: Pokemon - Rating: G - Genres: Angst - Characters: Other - Published: 2007/03/15 - Updated: 2007/03/15 - 344 words - Complete

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  • Toppled

    (#) facia 2007-04-02 12:42:19 PM

    I really liked the idea behind this. It seemed a tad too dramatic that he got driven out of his hometown after losing, but you really got across the change from on top of the world and then being nobody afterward. I think it would have been good to lengthen the story out a bit since what you've got is so interesting.
  • Toppled

    (#) Faeriegirl 2007-04-24 12:23:30 PM

    It's interesting how you do stories from a different perspective.

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