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• Luna's Hubby

  (#) DrT 2007-03-16

  I really hope Hermione THINKS before doing something stupid, like revealing who Harry is. She is impulsive about 'the truth' when it doesn't conflict with her world view.
  
  A good chapter.
  
  "T"

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  (#) mathiasgranger 2007-03-16

  Oh silly Hermione, you have the facts but not what they mean. I hope she figures it out soon, because she is a nice character to have around in a story and a good friend to have for Harry and Luna.
  
  I can't wait to see what Prof. Trelawney is like outside of the school. She is definitely an underutilized and underdeveloped character.
  
  May peace find Bellatrix.
  
  Thanks for the review,
  Matt

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  (#) matthiasblack 2007-03-16

  I enjoyed the chapter immensely and can't wait to see the summer and what happens in the next year. Keep up the good work.

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  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-03-16

  Liked the last scene with Hermione especially. I hope she realizes where she's gone wrong soon.
  
  I also hope we haven't seen the last of Warriorette, as her character is now one of my favorites.

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  (#) Dragen 2007-03-16

  What another great chapter, I knew that Hermione would find out about Harry sooner or later, I hope she keeps it to herself.

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  (#) JustAReader 2007-03-16

  A great chapter. so is Lupin going to be teacher next year? personaly I don't think they should have Crouch as a teacher since his only purpose was to make sure that Harry Potter won the turnament so I think that a different plan would be used sice the circumstances have changed. It can still be a very interesting year it should just be different as well, Which you seem very good at pulling off.

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  (#) Cateagle 2007-03-17

  Hmm, delightful wrap up for this year. I loved the way they slipped Aunt Sybil out of the school. The last bit was excellent; this version of Hermione needs to learn that "whatsoever things are true" aren't necessarily "whatsoever things should be spread around". If she can be persuaded to keep the information private, or allow herself to be so spelled, a bit more open-ness would help as she could be a great aid. If she can't, though, perhaps Luna's mother will find a memory-charm necessary to perform (not that I'd advocate it for most purposes, but...)

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  (#) Wolfric 2007-03-17

  I have just read your story to this point and I like it. I hope to read many more chapters Thanks for your efforts. W.

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  (#) FrancesWeyr 2007-03-19

  I am so glad to see you updating this regularly. I enjoy the way you manage to make this silly and at the same time give it a strong plot and well rounded characters.

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