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The Problem with Luna
When would be one of the worst points in time for an over-powered Harry to return to his past? During the Trial before the Wizengamot! Time-travelling rework Year 5. In this chapter, Padma figur...
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Re-Ordered
(#) mathiasgranger 2007-03-19
Haha well....how far are you down on the check list of sexual fetishes....breast feeding....etc?
Hmm interesting twist with the horcruxes...this might prolong things considerably.
Thanks for writing,
MattRe-Ordered
(#) BJH 2007-03-19
As for Luna, somehow I doubt just ignoring the problem and healing Luna will solve the problem. I have a feeling you will let it fester a bit and then a vision/prophecy so strong will happen that Luna can't block it. Will she kill herself trying? Or will she feel guilty thinking her prophecy will bring it to reality?
I'm curious to see what happens with the magic strap-ons, it could be a stimulating scene to read, not to mention rendering Harry even less important to the more Sapphicly inclined ladies. Will his male ego come into play? Or will he accept that 1 does not go into 5 evenly?
Now Voldie has a stronger soul than before and two new Horcruxes. Hmm, will the goblins find one when they raid the caves? And where will Tommy hide the other?
I'll just have to tune in to the next chapter to find out.
BJHAuthor's response
No, the strap-ons won't be shown. Think of them as a way for Harry to get some rest.
The next chapter will show what I think of Voldemort's brains -- plenty of book learning, but too much ego!
"T"Re-Ordered
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-03-19
Interesting update. Not enough Luna for me, given her situation, but I like the Voldemort development.Re-Ordered
(#) Wolfric 2007-03-19
The explanation of Luna's proclivities seems plausible. Thanks for the chapter. W.Re-Ordered
(#) animemonster 2007-03-19
I finally had the time to catch up to reading this. I really enjoy it and can't wait to see what happens next.Re-Ordered
(#) ed168 2007-03-19
The ending for this chapter just doesn't sit well. It would have been better if it ended after Harry screamed, either when they were meeting in the Headmaster's office or after the scene with Voldemort. The current ending loss its suspense.Re-Ordered
(#) PerfesserN 2007-03-19
You are my hero sir, the speed of you pen is such that it must have wings.
Excellent chapter, as usual, I especially like the detail and the multiple back stories - it's true, no one is an island.
Harrrrhh, I be seein' treasure in the next chapter, aye?Re-Ordered
(#) flower123 2007-03-19
THey really need to talk to luna! shes goingto end up really hurting her self. and voldermort taking back one of the horoxos thats good for them!update soon
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