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Any Other Night

Two friends from Giveaway University meet for one last night, before they go their separate ways. (Experimental, and somehow turned out warm & fuzzy.)

Category: Star Ocean: The Second Story - Rating: PG - Genres: Romance - Characters: Chisato Madison, Noel Chandler - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2005/05/07 - Updated: 2005/05/07 - 3118 words - Complete

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• Any Other Night

  (#) Cendri 2008-01-27 12:44:48 AM

  I get this old man feeling with Noel.
  
  Now, if you know me, I really feel for old men characters. It has nothing to do with age, but a state of mind, maturity, and maybe focus.
  
  So, this hit me in ways I wasn't expecting. And I don't get the feeling of a romance with this, I get the feeling of... one of those crazy bonds that certain people get and other people try to call something as misguided as soulmates.
  
  I adore adore ADORE how you did the dialogue, mixed in with the rest of the text, no quotation marks. Understated, because what was SAID didn't matter as much.
  
  I really like that effect, and I'm always impressed when writers go a little beyond standard grammar procedures.
  
  I mostly adore how you focus on certain things. Rumors. Drinks. Food. It's an interesting effect.
  
  I sound like a movie critic. XD Suffice to say, I'm glad you rec commended this, and I'm shocked (well, not really, people are fickle) that not many people noticed this.
  
  

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