Harry takes on Chilotha. Here comes the pain.
(#) PerfesserN 2007-03-24 10:38:44 AMBill could quote Mark Twian and say "Rumors of my death have been greatly exaggerated," thank goodness. Sad about Thundercloud though - I guess it'll be Bill's job to notify the family, or will Harry be the noble bearer of bad news?
Thank you for the quick update, as always, looking forward to the next one.
Please give us a clue as to what's going on in Luna's head at this time in the story.
Author's responseLuna will resurface in the last chapter as I set up the sequel. Glad you continue to enjoy. Chapter 22 is at the Beta for final review.~Jim
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-03-24 02:14:26 PMOK this was interesting way to set the Bill thing back on path. I'm curious on how you're going to pull this story back together to a wrap up in preparation for a sequel for some brittish retribution. Excellent work.
(#) JustAReader 2007-03-24 04:17:10 PMgreat chapter I was hoping that you didn't really plan to kill Bill, though I'll definitly miss Thundercloud too. Like I said in my last review that Daemon promises to be interesting, can't wait for the next update.
Author's responseChapter 22 is now with the Beta for final review. I will be up this weekend.~Jim
- So glad Bill is not dead!!, sad that it was thundercloud, I just hope you let some of the group alive(beside Harry), and I still will like to see De Soto get out of the city and help Harry.
Specially now that we see that Harry have the raw power to fight a dark lord but need the knowlege to do it with more skill and less luck.
The letters from Dumledore are convincing, at least seem he is not a evil bastard, just manipulative and foolish thinking he can control and know everything. I wonder (and hope to know)what Harry's "friends" are thinking and if Hermione is not regreting changing Harry for a cheating one side-minded boyfriend and a position Dumbeldore will not be capable to truly give her with out a lot of political consequences. By the way why did Luna have not answer it?
Hope to read next chapter soon and lets see how they defeat the Deamon(craft more than strenght I supose right?)
Sorry the long review but is a lot to think and comment in this story.
Author's responseI never mind a long review. Sorry my reply is so late in coming, but you'll be pleased to know that chapter 22 is with the beta for final review and the battle hopefully is epic.
Luna turns up in the last chapter. The other answers will most likely wait until the sequel. ~Jim
(#) foolishwandwaver 2007-03-25 11:29:40 AMSad about Thundercloud. I quite liked him. I have to say, besides Harry, Kwan is my favorite character. Kudo's to you for the many diffrent and compelling characters you have created.
I don't for a minute however believe Dumbledore's sincere with his apologies to Harry, the only part I believe is his saying how distraught Lupin is at what he did. The Weasleys and Hermione? Pffft! Like the concept of right and wrong does not apply to them! And My mother would say: (or paraphrase) "If Dumbledore told you to jump off a cliff, would you?"
Great fight scene. Looking forward to your solution towards the daemon. Maybe a bit of Old Testament would work, but would any one there know about that? At least it seems quite logical to me. Anxiously awaiting the next installment.
Author's responseAgain, sorry for the delay in responding. Chapter 22 will be out this weekend and I think you'll be pleased with the epic battle of the story. For the other answers about the people back in England well that's for the sequel to answer.~Jim
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-03-26 12:11:48 AMFor whatever reason, the alert for this chapter didn't work for me. I hope no one else had a similar problem.
I liked this chapter a lot, particularly the correspondences with Luna and Dumbledore. I think it goes without saying that I'm eager to read the final battle.
Author's responseI think the sites been having a bit of problems lately. Glad you liked it. The final battle should be out this weekend.~Jim
- Reading the chapter in one tab while writing in another.
"Is the little fair haired girl here with you in this reality or is it the eagle's offspring?" This doesn't sound like either Hermoine or Ginny. What have you got up your sleeve?
How do even 1000 Inferi damage a daemon?
Dumbledore is either witholding information or deluded.
Another a very good chapter. Thanks for the story.
Author's responseThe Daemon sees Alternate Universes. It has seen a few where Luna came with Harry into the Jungle and a few where Lauren Starless Sky came along as well...
The other questions -
Inferi - wait and see
Dumbledore - Perhaps he is both...