Just another girl who doesn't matter. Just another runaway.
(#) patricksgirl84 2007-03-21 10:10:46 PMI really like the story so far. Can't wait for more.
Author's responseIt should only take me a few days to get a new chapter up. I have it written out several chapters in advance, so mostly it's just making sure everything fits and trying to stay ahead. :)
- Oooh. Intriguing or what?
Very very well written.
Brilliant intro to a damaged character, giving away nothing really, but just enough to make her sympathetic.
I'm looking forward to more of this xx
Author's responseThank you. I love Lindsey, mostly because she's the most difficult character I've written to date. I'm constantly rewriting just because I don't want her to lose the air she has simply because I'm not used to writing someone so alone(?)
(#) whatkatydid 2007-03-27 06:12:02 AMShel, I printed this off lastnight and read it while I had a some time to myself, and I just want to say this:
This is what encourages me to keep writing. You said in the chapter what this story and I know, if you work as hard on all your chapters, you will have a faithful army of people who will be on your back wanting more every update.
Seriously, for the more mature of us on here, this is exactly what we need.
Your attention to detail was exquisite and I wasn't sure if I actually felt like Lindsey or I was just standing right beside her as an innocent bystander...
Incredible....I'm in awe.
Author's responseSo I have to tell you that this by far is probably the best review I have ever received! Thank you a million times over. Since the idea of Lindsey came to me a few monthes back, I had a feeling this story would mean more to me than any other I've ever written. That's already proving to be true. I hope I can continue to impress you. : )
(#) killmyending 2007-03-30 07:09:14 PMThe fact that you can capture a character so well and set the scene so absolutely wonderfully is amazing. You create such wonderful fiction that I just can't help but to read on.
Author's responseThank you so much! Expect a new chapter soon. I'm actually just about out the door to find some vending machine food that might serve as some sort of inspiration (or in simpler terms satisfy my hunger enough that I can read clearly through the fourth chapter before I post it).
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-03-31 10:53:54 AMWhat??? Where did this come from?
I was totally unaware you had another story, and I just so happened to stumble upon your page and notice this one. Anyway... I thought it was really good so far. The way she convinces herself that stealing is ok, her foster parents and her reactions, how she gets away with stealing because of her 'innocent eyes': was all very easy to follow and flowed together so nicely.
Well, I would give you points, but it seems that you have reached the max! It was well deserved!
Author's responseHaha. This one has been simmering in secrecy for awhile. This one is the story I've been saying "is going to come out in a few days" pretty much since I started posting Whatever It Takes. : )
(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-01-15 06:07:45 PMGosh, I can't believe I just found this. This story is just.... Incredible. Amazing. Wonderful. I don't even have the right words to describe such greatness. I promise I'll rate and review tomorrow. I have to go right now, but I just wanted to tell you that this first chapter was completely and utterly amazing. I wish I could have the writing skills you do. I mean, even the character is intriguing. Each word pulls me in more and more. I cannot wait to read some more. But, I have to go right now.