He couldn't believe his eyes! Never, NEVER did he think he'd see this day, but there it was, right before his eyes. He ran to the bathroom and slid next to the wall, burying his head in his hands. ...
(#) DJessie 2007-03-28 06:20:14 PM
Awwwww! Poor Lannie. POOR ARCHIE!! It was so sad. Great story. And thanks again for the advice. I sent you an email, suggesting the option for the 'I owe you big time' thing I mentioned earlier :). Thanks again.
I enjoyed that quite a lot, the sond fitted it all really well the only thing that got to me was that Atlanta pulled the plug when the doctors have to do that, but it was still a great read.
(#) ryan ross and brendon uries future everything:P 2007-03-29 04:09:44 PM
(#) ryan ross and brendon uries future everything:P 2007-03-29 04:10:17 PM
awww hehe so cute and sad
(#) twiinklestar 2007-03-30 03:51:26 PM
(#) Piscesfairy 2007-03-31 03:48:18 AM
OMG!! That was so sad.I loved the story.Poor archie he so didnt deserve to die.
(#) fluffypup 2007-03-31 05:52:13 PM
WOWOWOWOW that was awseome hate atlanta in this story anyway i reviewed
(#) Riane46 2007-07-12 12:01:48 AM
Dang you, Steph, you made me have tears in my eyes. No Archie. Really it was really hard I feel to cry, it's so sad, really it was so sad.
(#) Atlanta101 2007-07-22 08:29:35 PM
OMG.......Great story mind you it made me cry for about an hour.I loved the story it was so sad OMG i still can't believe that he died.OMG I HATE ATLANTA IN THIS STORY (no i don't hate her she is one of my fav characters but in this story i am making an exeption.)