These chapters might seem to be moving slowly now, but I promise there will be something to catch your attention in the near furture.
- oh my gosh. i love this story so far. amazing writing. very captivating. i need more updates!
Author's responseI've got this story written quite far in advance. Updating is all a matter of having time to reread and perfect each chapter. I don't want to make any mistakes bigger than typos with this story.
- Ok, so my brother ALWAYS does the "O R They?" line, and I had to cover my mouth as to not laugh out loud since it's one am here.
This was beautifully written again. I love how the characters are observing one another trying to figure each other out. That's a great way for the reader to try to figure the characters out as well.
Author's responseHaha. I think the Rushmore lined I used was one of my favorites. I could seriously watch that movie everyday and never get sick of it. I might just have to rent it again when I get home this weekend. I think I could have bought like 4 copies with how much I've spent on rentals. I'm glad you liked it.
- I love how you show the awkwarness of this situation. You can almost feel the discomfort in the car.
And the lift button thing made me smirk. And Patrck's quotation made me laugh because I knew what it was and both things provided just a glint of comic relief.
Well done. Another great and intriguing update. Points for you, lady x
Author's responseThank you for the rating and the review! I'm glad you noticed the hints of comic relief I threw in. I figured the awkwardness needed to be broken up at least a little. And what better way to do that than with Patrick quoting a movie.
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-03-31 11:13:28 AMOh, I can honestly feel the tension...
You are very talented, I think you need to know. This story is amazing. I will definately be coming beck for more. ;)
(Again, sorry for the sucky review, I have company over that just won't leave... you know how that is...)
Author's responseHaha. It's not a sucky review at all. I'm really glad you like the story though. Your opinion is definitely one I appreciate greatly frankly because your stories are incredible!