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by Merc 2 Reviews

The Mysidian twins are growing older, and Palom worries that they're also growing apart.

Category: Final Fantasy 4 - Rating: G - Genres: Fantasy - Characters: Palom, Porom - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2005/10/14 - Updated: 2005/10/15 - 2527 words - Complete


  • Twin

    (#) lassarina 2006-07-14 07:54:28 PM

    This is absolutely wonderful. I love the insight into Palom and how even though he fears they're growing apart, they're still just the same. I think you got his voice down exactly, and you've characterized the twins beautifully. You captured Palom's mischievous nature and Porom's quiet dignity without having to state it out. So nice!
  • Twin

    (#) AngelMeiru 2006-07-16 09:10:11 PM

    Cute story. The twin mages were always my favorite characters.

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