The Mysidian twins are growing older, and Palom worries that they're also growing apart.
- This is absolutely wonderful. I love the insight into Palom and how even though he fears they're growing apart, they're still just the same. I think you got his voice down exactly, and you've characterized the twins beautifully. You captured Palom's mischievous nature and Porom's quiet dignity without having to state it out. So nice!