- I REALLY like the idea you have for this :D The only thing that I would critique you on is grammar, for instance, "He's complaining of about migraines again." you could have either left out "of" or "about" which would give you, "He's complaining of migraines again." Also, it mentioned the patient as a "he" but then it turns into "she"? But other than that, it's a great storyline :D
Author's responsewhoa.. this is awkward.. erm ok. i guess i really do need to work on my grammar. and about the patient, 'he' didnt turn into 'she'. Isobel thought that the patient was a male, thus calling the patient 'he'. the nurse corrected Izzy by calling the patient 'she' because.. well.. she's a female.
(#) isuckatlifen 2007-03-29ahhh so shes gonna see him again. how does she not know hws famose though my chem is all over the media just watch mtv for a sec and youll see something about them god i hate mtv im more of a fuse fan anyway good story
trust me sweetheart. medical school does not tolerate mtv. the same thing i'll be facing when school starts next week. bummer.
(#) MCRANDFOBLover 2007-04-01Duude! You HAVE to update, and soon!! or I'll.. or i'll DIE!! Don't think you want that on your mind. do ya? ;P
Author's responseDIE???? tsk, tsk. Remember the words of our beloved MCR, my dear. I am not afraid to keep living!!! and that includes being denied the luxury of reading Flirting PhD.
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