Kaoru/Kyo; Kaoru is ripping Kyo's paper heart.
(#) namida_no_uta 2006-06-02 02:26:49 PMPerhaps it was because the word count was not much and you wanted to end it happyly, the ending does feel like a bit rushed. Until the end/confession it was going so amazing and I could feel my heart protesting to Kyo's pain, feeling sad for him. But the ending doesn't reach the perfection of the beginning.
An amazing story nevertheless