So it's really starting to begin now! it IS real!
- can't understand why you hate this chapter i most certainly don't. in fact i would quite enjoy another one soon PWEASE :)
Author's responseLol i'm so glad you liked it! it seemed when writting chapter three that the story had hit adolesence: rebellious, not doing what it was told, talking back and being in a bad mood (writting wise, if that makes ANY sense at all), so it's nice to know that you like it! chapter 4 has a small section written XD so dances more soon.
- Damn, girl.
That was hella good. xD Now I'm trying to sound ghetto; what the fuck? lol! SPRING BREAK eaeeyyyahhhh! lol. this was one FANTASTICO chapter. fast paced, yes, but since you wanna get somewhere with this story...well, it worked out fine enough for me. hee. :D
grace has an account on here? looks for her grr ok. thanks for the a/n reference to me, lol. (although you really didn't have to, esp. what you did for me this morning during PE lol)
you're doing just fine, darling, just fine. don't worry; this story will come through despite the agony of writing chapter three. ;)
Author's responsewoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo i love your reviews :D and grace does not have an account, but she still is inspiring, so there :D. and PE was no problem (wow that seems ages ago. woo for spring break)
and i'm in love with mickey mouse so there may not be an update! mwahahaha. i'm just kidding btw. chapter four is being written. don't worry.
- I'm excited you updated.
I like... annoyingly kept checking for this story to be updated. And I got it finally. :-)
I love it even though you hate it. So there.
You know, I'm extremely excited for more. :-)
Author's responsewooooooooooo! you have no clue how happy this made me! wow! okay...wow dances i'm seriously happy, and now i'm back from vacation, i can write an update! hooray for chapter 4!
(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-06-29 11:45:53 AM"She rolled over again to find herself face to face with Ryan, his face scrunched like a small child's, blankets wrapped completely around his waist, his thin bare chest exposed to the open air...whoa...shirtless Ryan"
Ooh-la la. XD
Anywho, I found this chapter quite entertaining with its quirky dialogue to its humerous remarks and the hidden crushes these characters may have on one another. ;]
Gahhh! I LOVE IT.
Now, I must go LOVE the next chapter!
(PS: I adore your chapter titles. They are AMAZING.)
Author's responseXD thank you thank you thank you for reviewing all of these chapters! you are TOO awesome to be real! but i'm so glad you are XD
chapter titles are fun!