Nothing exciting or really that relevant. Just trying to move the story along. :)
(#) whatkatydid 2007-04-06 02:57:50 PMYou're wonderful quips and attention to conversational body language, amuses and inspires me greatly. It's hard to remember what the whole DoJ things is about sometimes, but then I read great writing like yours and I remember....
I miss you.
Author's responseI love your reviews. They make me want to write more. I miss you and our little dysfunctional family. It's crazy. Much love :)
(#) luckysgc921 2007-04-06 06:21:01 PMswoon'd
I have to steal ms. heather's review: lola+patrick=bestthingever!
also, is it really sad that I like ME better IN your story? Apparently on paper I am way cooler. and have a cute boyfriend.
btw...that whole toss IT from the bus thing...umm...I don't see a problem with that thought at all? shrug
loves you. loves it. wants more. has more? ;)
Author's responseI do make you sound really cool, don't I? I'm sure you're just as cool in real life, maybe not everyone "gets" your brand of coolness. I thought the throwing Adrienne off the bus thing seemed like something you'd suggest. There's more story in the works, my dear. And there just might be a Lola/Patrick hookup...who knows.
- Ok, first: The line that Andy won't eat anything with a shadow totally made me laugh out loud. That's funny stuff right there! Second: You are so good at painting a visual picture that I swear I get lost in your stories. And third: Patrick and Lola really need to be getting it on. How many times do I have to tell you this??? Honestly....sheesh.
Oh, well. Wonderfully written. Katy wasn't kidding when she said that this story is a reminder of what the DoJ is all about. You, my dear, are amazing!
Smooches and ratings are in store for you!!!
Author's responseHave I ever told you that your reviews make me smile? Like big time. They're always so sweet. You weren't named Nice Spice by accident. Lola and Patty will get around to "getting it on" eventually. Maybe. I don't know. I like dangling the idea around. Speaking of smooches and ratings, I think I'm waaaay behind on your new story. DoJ hugs!
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-04-16 02:16:26 PMShe can blow her way back to wherever the hell she's from. -> Congrats. That’s definitely one of the most digusting visuals anyone’s ever given me to think about.
"Unless you're sprinkling Arsenic in her eggs, this is not productive." -> Does your hubby know you got a crush on Bridget? Why else would she get the coolest lines EVER?!
God, did you write the perfect (shy) image of le Stump.
You rockage my… rib cage…?
Author's responseI'm one classy lady, huh? The hubby is coping with my feelings for Bridget...I think he likes it, though.