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2 ReviewsRoy and Ed spend an afternoon together in a park, and actually manage to keep the arguing to a minimum. Could be gen, could be pre-slash.
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(#) Kris 2006-01-25 10:04:27 PM
this story made me happy...the perfect amount of humor to make it short and just plain good. hits da spot!
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(#) Ithilwen 2006-03-26 04:09:54 PM
Not bad, but it could stand to resolve a bit more at the end, though the last line is okay. It doesn't come to enough of a point before it closes.