(#) AshleyChaotic 2007-04-10See, I was going to quote all my favorite parts in the story, but the whole ending is way too good, and I'd end up quoting the whole damn thing. So I'm going to quote only 3 things.
/"Evie!" he yelped, his slightly watering as he leaned over the distance to kiss me. When he parted, Patrick coughed and ran his fingers over my hand again.
"I don't think that's safe for your mental health either," Joe looked down at him.
Patrick's line made me aw and laugh. I love important fatherly sounding Patrick. It's adorable. But we are already aware of this.
"Are you jealous of the fact Evie loves me and not you?" I asked. Joe gulped and his jaw clenched.
Kay is it bad that I imagined spongebob from the movie after he ate all the ice cream. XD. As much as I love Jovie, I'm a Pevie fan and I'm not sure why I liked this line. Probably cause it reminded me of spongebob.
Okay okay now time for my favoritest part in the story.
/ "What the hell are you doing?" I half-laughed. Pete forced a smile and hopped slightly towards a boom-box that sat on the ground.
"I'd lift it up, but," he laughed. "I might break another leg," I let my fingertips cover my mouth in slight embarrassment as he hit play on the CD player. But I don't think it was the right song.
When I think about you, I touch myself...
Pete immediately turned it off and even from high up on my balcony I could see him blushing.
"Ok, never mind about that," I chewed on my lip nervously.
I fer realz LOLed. That part made my day. This was so cute and I'm majorly jealous. And its sad cause this is a story. haha.
Wooo Pevie is over.
But Boo that's it's over. Because what am I going to look foreward too? You womanizer. I loved this story so much. And I'm going to end this with
Pete n Evie > Pete n Lexi.
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