by Magic144
1 Reviews Very sad, but truthful. This poem consists of four tankas, about a young bear captive bear. Please read and give your honest opinion. Enjoy!
*NOTE: please read slowly, for it will have a better ef...
Category: Poetry -
Rating: G - Genres: Drama - Characters: -
Published: 2007/04/10 - Updated: 2007/04/10 - 104 words - Complete
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(#) MarkPoa 2007-04-19 08:51:35 PM
Good job! This was a refreshingly find here in the poetry section. I liked your use of the tanka. I disliked the ending though... but I appreciate the subtle irony with the title.