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A Failure To Plan Is A Plan For Failure
7 ReviewsTemptation: it forces us to stop pretending to be what we want and start being who we are.
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(#) tinkerbell29 2007-04-11 06:13:42 PM
so i really just want to say that this is pretty much my favorite story in the section period......it's awesome!!! -
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(#) Geets 2007-04-12 12:54:40 AM
omg, that was, like, one of the best chapters!! haha, I loved it :D I have to tell you - the ending was brilliant -
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(#) meeniemoe 2007-04-12 01:18:25 AM
someone's taken two pills of revenge, and three pills of a new plot against ryan. :D im happy. update more! xoxo. -
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(#) trophywives 2007-04-14 01:02:02 PM
holy shit. this is so fucking SEXY. hahha.
it's really funny, too. for instance, i laughed at this part:
"So he sat, staring at Jon Walker.
He was alone, reading a magazine, eating cheetos.
The perfect opportunity.
"Take a picture. It'll last longer."
He popped in another cheeto, not even bothering to look up from the article he was reading.
Dammit. Brendon's cover was blown."
haha yeah, i don't know why, but it's really funny. great story. -
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(#) killmyending 2007-04-14 07:26:46 PM
Aha, gosh. Another brilliant chapter. I really kind of love the teasing, the tension and such. It makes for good drama.
I loved the line; "Was it 'let's buy matching flip-flops! I know Ryan will want to fuck me then!'?"
Actually maybe I just loved the whole chapter. ;]
Can't wait for an update.