The waiting it terrible, the police have news
hurry!! MONICA!! WAKE THE FUCK UP!!! AWW MAN RAY YOU TOO!!!!
(#) Cerediwen 2007-04-17 08:31:30 AM
sniffles Hell I hate all this waiting...but I love this story...aghh love/hate relationship dawning sighs
(#) zaberdeenz 2007-04-17 09:03:18 AM
all i can say, is that i love this. period. you really are an awesome writer, it shows especially in chapters like this- all emotions and details really paint the picture real and truely believable. keep it coming.
Ficwad is really mean to you, eh?
Anyway, I loved this chapter! I almost cried! I loved it :) Keep up the great work! :)
I had such a horrible moment of dread when Gerard promised Kelly that Monica would be alright and then i looked at the chapter title and i seriously thought you were going to kill Monica off! But then i read the last line and i was all happy...but set to cry at the same time!
(#) icyblue858 2007-04-17 02:09:38 PM
I hope Ray is okay!!
awww =[ i got a little teary
(#) cliftney 2007-04-17 05:27:13 PM
Please update soon i need to see how Ray is.......and how his girlfriend is going to find out?.. dont keep me hanging tooo long
HEY, IT SAYS YOU UPDATED.....
SO WHERE IS IT!?