Team Eight is assigned a mission, and unexpected things occur....
sweet, i liked it , whens part two comin out?
dammit im i the only one who likes this story, its realy good:)
Thank you very much!! I'm beginning to work on the second part, and I'll post it right after I'm finished!
I enjoyed it :)
Maybe happened all a little too quick, but you could always add chapters that lead up to the event that occured in the hospital room.
apart from the suddenness it was great, well done!
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