The Templar have come out of the shadows. The battle between light and dark now takes on a new look. Conspiracy, betrayal, and a decent helping of buttkicking all around. HarryFleur in later chapte...
- nice scene with fleur! very good idea!
not a very exciting chapter, but still well written...though it amazes me that ron and hermione became friends without harry...if you look at them in the first book that wouldn't have happened without him...and how is ginny alive and kicking? shouldn't she been basilisk-food? maybe you could give a short account of what happened at hogwarts without harry being there? voldemort's attempts to come back and such....
i hope harry/jericho will be able to save his fellow templars...
Author's responseThat is probably a good idea to explain some of that. First Hermione could easily become friends with Ginny in second year which could lead to friends with the Weaslys. As to stopping Voldimort all those times during school, many people like to say Dumbledore let some of that crap happened, which Im inclined to believe since its hard to think that a man as powerful and wise as Dumbledore is made out to be, could be so stupid as to let that crap happen. So its safe to assume Albus saved the day most of the time. I'll see if I can go into detail about those early years, but honestly they don't have a major signifigance to the story, so if I cant find the oppurtunity to explain them then I won't try to force one.
- Very interesting, indeed. It will be most interesting to see how this "dance" works out. I thought Jericho's answer was a particularly well phrased one while being nicely misleading.
Author's responseMisleading? That really wasn't the intention I was aiming for. I was merely focusing on explaining how he could do some of the things seen in chapter 1 while also confirming the fact that he has no clue he is Harry Potter...for those wondering when everyone finds out...that still has a little ways to go.
- Cliche my ass. I've seen some stories where Harry is almighty and crap but this takes a unique approach to it. You explain how the powers work rather than going "Oh its just cause I have misticle powers and shit". People that rate this story as cliche obviously haven't read it with an open mind. You even said that Harry's powers would be toned down!
Author's responseThanks for the encouragement. It is kinda upsetting to see negative ratings. Rest assured I'll continue to write my story. Cant please everybody after all.
- interesting.. I'm guessing by the last chapter that Jericho is Harry, unless I'm misinterpretting the clues you've dropped.
I look forward to more
Author's responseHehe I've been asked that question quite a bit. Anyway, yes Jericho is Harry. And it will still be a while before he realizes that, that is who he is.