Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > When Your Heart Stops Beating
Chapter 8
6 ReviewsImagine losing years off your life... Keri Atwater works as a bar tender in a local night club. Aside from having a moderately exciting but not the best paying job in the world, something else isn...
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When Your Heart Stops Beating
(#) haleyxhomicide 2007-04-19 09:22:19 PM
FINALLY!!!
Yes, I'm very happy.
I love this,so much damn detail!@
I love it! -
When Your Heart Stops Beating
(#) I_Mean_This 2007-04-19 09:28:45 PM
:( poor girl. i heart it...and bobs coffee...and bob. hehe.. ^_^ -
When Your Heart Stops Beating
(#) AlexSanDee 2007-04-19 10:04:35 PM
Yea, your back. Please write more soon. -
When Your Heart Stops Beating
(#) SafeFromRobotsDAMN 2007-04-20 10:15:05 AM
Well done on your finals, i'm glad it wasn't too bad!
and this chapter was really moving, i can't wait for the next chapter!
I was eating as i was checking the updates and i almost choked when i saw this up there because i mangaged to make a horrible school girl yelp type thing forgetting i had food in my mouth...silly me! :)
anyhoo: what my point is, is that i'm really really really happy you updated!Author's response
Ahahaha, yeah. I nearly choked when I updated too! This chapter was so awesome to write. I just went off the top of my head. :) Glad you liked it! -
When Your Heart Stops Beating
(#) ThePatient 2007-04-21 09:59:00 AM
OMG! awwww this brought tears to my eyes..specially when you said daddy's are supposed to be there to protect they little girls againt maonster n bad people n stuff..that was so moving! well done! awwwwwwwww -
When Your Heart Stops Beating
(#) faithless 2007-04-22 09:17:39 AM
oo im intreged....p.s cant spell so if u cant read this im not a dunce just cant spell!