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"Guess Who I Bumped Into in the Floo?"

Preparations are underway to meet Voldemort on three fronts

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Romance - Characters: Bellatrix, Harry, Hermione, Marietta Edgecombe, Other - Published: 2007/04/20 - Updated: 2007/04/21 - 4849 words

Reviews

• Family Issue

  (#) lycus 2007-04-21 01:24:51 AM

  YES I Love It,That Was Great Hermione Just Knew That Her Man Was Envolved With What Was Going On.And That Hospital Scene Was Great I'm Surprised Hermione Didn't Faint.And I'm Glad That Their Weren't Any Hard Feelings Between Hermione And Marie. And We Have Contact Between Harry And His Future Wife...Oops I mean Hermione.I Can't Wait For The Next Chapter.And Now Time To Rant...HBP Had Harry & Hermione OOC When Has Hermione Ever Behaved That Way Especally When She Found Out About The Prpohecy Wouldn't She Have Been In The Library 24 Hours A Day With Harry's Life On The Line.And Harry Ingnoring The Propecy Completely To Pursue Ginny.Please!! And For The Opposites Attract People Hermione Still Wouldn't Be With Ron She Would End Up With Crabbe Or Goyle.

  Author's response

  Thank you for reading and reviewing, and yes I agree, our Hermione was OOC in the HBP. She needs to be with Harry, period. And since I wrote this particular fic . . .
  Expect some rough waters ahead.
  N!

• Family Issue

  (#) DrT 2007-04-21 05:01:13 AM

  Yes, 'urk' would be a good comment to make at that point.
  
  "T"

  Author's response

  Thanks for reading and reviewing, as always. I toyed with the concept of eloquent silence at the end of this chapter but 'urk' seemed to fit.
  N!

• Family Issue

  (#) glazedlookineyes101 2007-04-21 06:13:24 AM

  Yay! Whoohoo! Contact! Oh man, Harry is in serious trouble! How is he going to explain his way out of this?
  
  I was actually expecting Hermione's brain to short circuit and to be speechless. Nice touch with the "Urk".
  
  Sometimes I wish I had discovered this fic when it has been completed. I'm always anxiously waiting for the next update and it is killing me. That's one hell of a cliffhanger you left this chapter in!
  
  Just a few little corrections if you do not mind. This sentence:
  
  "What a beautiful baby boy," Hermione gushed, is he yours?
  
  It should instead be:
  
  "What a beautiful baby boy!" Hermione gushed. "Is he yours?"
  
  This: "Oh yes," Belle cooed, he's our first, the first of many if I have my way.
  
  Should be: "Oh yes," Belle cooed. "He's our first. He's the first of many if I have my way."
  
  This: "I'll have to be content with our little Paul," Myrtle gushed "but isn't he the cutest thing?"
  
  Should be: "I'll have to be content with our little Paul," Myrtle gushed. "But isn't he the cutest thing?"
  
  Sorry about that. I just noticed them and thought you might want to know about them.

  Author's response

  Thanks for reading and reviewing, at first I was going to go with eloquent silence, but 'urk' won out in the end. Thanks for pointing out the punctuation omissions, (I don't know how I missed those, I'm usually so punctuational . . .) I can only say I was suffering from a bit of jet lag when I posted this, I was in Napa Valley playing tour guide for some friends from D.C. We only just got back late last night.

• Family Issue

  (#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-04-21 07:30:18 AM

  Your ending of this chapter had me laughing until I was coughing. I'm sick today so not fun. I'm glad you finally involved one of Harry's core friends. I'm very curious as to how her full reaction will be to Harry's new status so start typing! ;)
  
  Geovanni Luciano

• Family Issue

  (#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-04-21 07:30:29 AM

  Your ending of this chapter had me laughing until I was coughing. I'm sick today so not fun. I'm glad you finally involved one of Harry's core friends. I'm very curious as to how her full reaction will be to Harry's new status so start typing! ;)
  
  Geovanni Luciano

  Author's response

  Thanks for reading and reviewing, you must have really liked this chapter, you reviewed it twice. (I know, I know, darn sticky key syndrome!)
  I should have an update ready by Wednesday, hope you're feeling better by then!

• Family Issue

  (#) kellypassion 2007-04-21 12:54:42 PM

  I loved Hermione ending of the chapter

  Author's response

  Thanks for reading and responding. I enjoy flustering Hermione whenever I can. . .

• Family Issue

  (#) Essedyss 2007-04-21 06:41:18 PM

  That was a great ending to the chapter! Hermione's reaction was priceless. lol I'm glad that she's finally come into contact with Harry and the Family, but how will she react? :) Anyways, can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the excellent work!

  Author's response

  Thanks, as always, for reading and reviewing. Expect some stormy weather when Hermione finds out what Harry's been up to this summer!

• Family Issue

  (#) snowman 2007-04-21 09:04:43 PM

  Good job.

  Author's response

  Thanx

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