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Chapter 2: Davidovitch's

by IP82 3 Reviews

Chapter 2

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy - Characters: Harry - Warnings: [!!] [V] - Published: 2005/10/27 - Updated: 2005/10/27 - 8205 words


  • Potter's Resistance 1: Breaking Ties

    (#) lantana 2006-07-09 08:50:30 PM

    The story itself is good, very good, and I added it to my alerts for this reason. You do seem to have a problem with adding in articles though (I know some languages do not have them - is your native tongue one of them?) which I would be glad to help with, if you like. If so, contact me, I'd be happy to help you with this little detail in an otherwise fine story.
  • Potter's Resistance 1: Breaking Ties

    (#) Dragen 2007-01-09 04:25:16 AM

    What a great second chapter;

    I don't know who Lucas Vader is, but I like the idea of Harry changing his name, so that no-body could find him.

    So Harry's got a new wand, cool. What is the fucking Phoenix trying to hide from Harry.

    What the hell is the voice in Ron's head about

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