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Chapter 3

Chapter 3. The end:)

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst, Drama - Characters: Gerard Way, Mikey Way, Other - Warnings: [?] - Published: 2007/04/21 - Updated: 2007/04/22 - 699 words

Reviews

• Because This War Can't Last Forever

  (#) jerseygirlxx 2007-04-21 07:10:29 PM

  This was perfect. Very emotional. You should be very proud. (Okay and maybe you were right about the sushi!) (I can so see Mikey being like 'hey is the sushi ready {cooked} yet?') lol. Sorry this was just so sad Im trying to lighten the mood! Great job!-xoxo

  Author's response

  At last, both author and critic are satisfied!
  I smiled when I wrote that. I could picture Mikey saying that, too. So cute:) And don't worry about trying to lighten the mood; there's no harm in that.

• Because This War Can't Last Forever

  (#) me_myself_and_MCR 2007-04-21 07:44:27 PM

  OH MY GOD crys loudly THAT IS SOOOO SAD!!!!!!!! I am commenting on all the chapters; they are so good and sooo perfect; well; to me at least. I LOVE this story; even though its so sad Sniff sniff I wish i could write like this; but you do have to give me credit; my story 'Even if saving you sends me to heaven' Is sort of okay... i guess. Anywho; I LOVE THIS STORY!! Adds to fav. although it is so sad; i feel it; and i could just see how gee would feel, ya know? Any ways; your probaly bored so i'll stop blabbering
  
  O.O o.O o.o U.U O.O Autumn (nichole)

  Author's response

  Thanks. But really, it never would've gotten this good if it weren't for jerseygirlxx. She's great at critiquing stuff and helping me word things just right.

• Because This War Can't Last Forever

  (#) MCR_dynamite 2007-04-22 07:01:35 AM

  That was sad, but sweet. Great description. I was actually crying. I'm quite speechless at that, it was amazing! Very, very well written!

  Author's response

  Thanks. I'm going to go make a few changes on the third chapter.

• Because This War Can't Last Forever

  (#) faithless 2007-04-23 11:52:12 AM

  woa thats woa! its beautiful, ive never read something so heart renching! woa!

  Author's response

  I cried too.

• Because This War Can't Last Forever

  (#) MyVengefulRomance 2007-04-23 07:32:19 PM

  I liked it the same as when I first read it. You are an amazing author, you know? I love your work. You're the CSI author, right? Or am I insane? Probably the latter, but anyway, still loved this. Great job. grins and hugs

  Author's response

  No, you're correct. I am the CSI author.
  HA! I HAVE A REALLY COOL NICKNAME NOW WOOOO!!!
  dances

• Because This War Can't Last Forever

  (#) thelaughinghermit 2007-08-19 04:29:38 PM

  Aww, that's so sad. But it was well written.
  ~Hermit

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