(#) watch_the_sky 2007-04-22patrick is an idiot. but this story is fantastic and i love andy being the main character, its such a refressing change. keep up the good work.
Author's responseI don't know if I would say idiot, lol. Maybe ineloquent? or obilvios? Either way, we should give him the benefit of the doubt, lol...mostly because he's Patrick and Lindsey is just difficult. As for Andy being the main character, I agree. I know personally I write about Pete far too much. Glad you liked it.
- Oh that chapter was good! I think it is so cute to see Andy as the rescuer/knight in shining armor and Lindsey is slowly allowing him to do so. I think she needs saving more than she realizes. This is good stuff, dear!
Author's responseI couldn't agree more with your review! lol. In regards to Andy being the knight in shining armor and Lindsey needing more saving them she realizes. At least, those are two thing I constantly kept in mind when I was writing this part of the story. I think just like anything else, Lindsey has to slowly learn to trust him, once she does I think there might be less freak-outs, maybe, haha. Social skills are a whole new process for her though. Although, social skills might still be a process for all of us haha.
P.S. I just read over that and I'm not sure if it made any sense. I have to stop trying to respond to reviews instead of sleeping. : )
- Oh, how easy it is for people to assume that because you don't speak, you're some kind of crazy person...
I would hate to think what people assume about me.
It was amazing as always my dear.
I love it.
Author's responseI'm pretty sure people think I'm crazy haha. If not because I'm silent, it's because once you get me to start talking I don't stop. And that whole thinking before you say something outloud thing doesn't quite work for me, haha. Oh yeah, and I laugh at a lot of my own jokes too.
Anyway. thank you.
- "she was teetering on the edge of more then just the apartment building" What a line that is.Seriously, just- ah!
And Patrick? What the hell! I suppose he's just kind of looking out for Andy, but talk about insensitive.
Great chapter. Your beautiful writing never ceases to amaze me.
Author's responseYou have no idea how excited I get when people pick out my favorite lines from chapters. It makes me feel like I just accomplished something huge. haha, but I could just be weird. This one was my other favorite "She chose not to move because she was afraid of falling (not just off the roof)." mostly because I liked the fact that I was able to hint at the fact that Lindsey found falling in love just as frightening as losing her life. I love how much everyone likes this story. It's kinda like we're all in on something awesome lol. Yeah. I really have to go back to eating my frosted animal crackers and not talking for the night, lol.
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