(#) jade_kwl_name_eva 2007-04-25I remember ANZAC day from when I went to an Australian School. It was so sad everytime we had a special service at my school and some of my friends went back to Australia to visit their dead relatives graves.
Author's responsethanks that is pretty sad.
(#) paua_dragon 2007-04-25that was good, (i'm aussie also, don't know if i have any rellies from the war tho) but it would have probably been better in one of the original sections; historical maybe?
Author's responsethanks for the reveiw. yeah it would of been better in one of those but i realy wanted everyone howm i write to to see my feeling for the dead. thanks for reading my (very long) poam
- well done mate. I marched for ANZAC day and i know feeling of remembering and what they did, just like every other true blue Australian. Your poem was one of a kind, and i have not read anything like it for quite some time. The little story in the begining about the boy asking the man about the medles was good- it had alot of meaning. And i liked how you went onto say about all the other men and woman and how they contributed. Well done. Bloody good.
Author's responsethank you so much. This means alot to me. You rock. ANZAC day is very hard day for me bu ti will never forget it. THANKS!!!
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