(#) lady_venom_x 2007-04-25Your grammar was quite off today. So, like the other person said, work on that =) It's hard to get it perfect, though. No one has perfect grammar. Not even me :P
Anyway, Ray better smarten the hell up! We'll have to kick him. Hahaha.
EEEEEE I'm jealous of Kara. I want to marry Bob! XD I love Bob.
This chapter was really good. =)
(#) COMBUSTIONXX 2007-04-25Okay im a bit confused? So is Kara still i virgin? i know she is Bobs Fiance and all but im not sure by that last refrence. Stupid question i guess.
Author's response.Nope she's not; remember when she thought she was pregnant? They last reference was that they were going to spend sometime together doing 'Lord Knows What' before she had to be home
(#) Caitydidsworld 2007-04-25I think I have a new job for my voodoo doll. What's with the pissy reviews? Isn't this fan fiction, not pulitzer prize winning fiction???? Alexsandee can make Gerard any way she wants him. Soft and cuddly or hard and ugly. It's her decision. So what if there are mistakes in the story? Just roll with it. Try to enjoy it for what it is - an expression of someone's very hard work and love for a great group of guys. The amount of research and effort that she has expended on this story is phenominal and more than any other 10 writers on the site.
So, she's not perfect. Who among us is? Let she(or he) who is without mistakes toss the first eraser (stone).
Let's all lighten up.
Of course you are entitled to your opinions and feel free to express them at any time. Just as I am expressing mine.
(And I like Gerard soft and squishy!)
(#) Reign_Madden 2007-04-26They can do the down and dirty!! or Bob can help Kara with her homework lol both could take up an hour.
That was great and just for the record I like Gerard when he's sweet, even though he wasn't all that sweet in past chapters, I think you have the right balance. Not only that but when something dramatic happens you tend to use terms of endearment alot more then usual and I reckon that's what FICTIONAL Gerard is doing.
I'm glad Christa's staying she belongs with Ray 100%
Let she(or he) who is without mistakes toss the first eraser (stone). That is some profound yet funny shit go caitydidsworld that rocked lol
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