- I love this story. The plotline and the characters are /excellent/. Your characterization of Fratley made me like the character, your Amarant is fantastic and true to canon, and Gudrun is so well-characterized and introduced that it feels like she's a natural part of the canon FF9 world. Your older Puck seems like a natural progression of his character as well.
Your other original Burmecian characters rock as well, especially Sigurd. Someday he'll learn what an inside voice is. Maybe.
- I really enjoyed this and the ending was superb and strangely hilarious.
Both Fratley and Gudrun are such interesting characters.
And I like the way that Amarant pokes fun at Zidane and Garnet. I like the way he terrorizes Cordelia a little and how he is so blunt with Garnet.
I look forward to reading the next part.
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