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• Xanthic Growlithe Contract

  (#) Faeriegirl 2007-04-30

  I really like the way you build the tension and mystery surrounding different aspects of the story. There is obviously something going on with the gym leader, and the strange scenery. I'm begining to think he's in some kind of simulation, matrix style but that doesn't entirely add up... Well, I guess you'll just have to keep writing!

  Author's response

  Thanks, there'll be a lot more of that throughout the rest of the story ^^ Some kind of simulation...that's an interesting take.

• Xanthic Growlithe Contract

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-05-06

  I like what I've seen so far. The shifts in perspective are well done, and I can definitely appreciate the luck factor. Hope to see more soon.

  Author's response

  Thanks!

• Xanthic Growlithe Contract

  (#) St_Elmos_Fire 2007-05-11

  Very interesting! Michael looks like a good character. We'll have to see in the next chapters, I suppose.

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