(#) Life_is_42 2007-05-09first of all the last line was complete AW XD and squueee inducing. very cute.
And two updates! happyness all around XD
I was so relieved that you responded that it IS brendons breathes again
this was so very cute :D i can't wait to find out what these presents are.
Finally one little thing:
'Yes the kids, Thomas is almost 18 months.' Brendon smiled.
'Brendon he's not even a year old yet.'
18 months is six months over a year...so Tommy would be 1 and 1/2 ...so you may want to fix that? just a little detail though, in a sea of wonderful :D
Author's responseYeah that was the point. :D
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