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A walk in the park. . .

Brendon and Chelsea take a quiet strolle in the park.

Category: Panic! At The Disco - Rating: PG - Genres: Drama, Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2007/05/09 - Updated: 2007/05/10 - 1245 words - Complete

Reviews

• Beautiful Disaster

  (#) theblondeone0828 2007-05-09 07:31:24 PM

  awww the ending was super cute!
  love it

• Beautiful Disaster

  (#) Life_is_42 2007-05-09 07:50:51 PM

  first of all the last line was complete AW XD and squueee inducing. very cute.
  
  And two updates! happyness all around XD
  
  I was so relieved that you responded that it IS brendons breathes again
  
  this was so very cute :D i can't wait to find out what these presents are.
  
  Finally one little thing:
  
  'Yes the kids, Thomas is almost 18 months.' Brendon smiled.
  
  'Brendon he's not even a year old yet.'
  
  18 months is six months over a year...so Tommy would be 1 and 1/2 ...so you may want to fix that? just a little detail though, in a sea of wonderful :D
  
  Lifey

  Author's response

  Yeah that was the point. :D

• Beautiful Disaster

  (#) trueLIEx3 2007-05-09 09:15:07 PM

  Awwwe. You really do love us! Such cute chapters. =).

  Author's response

  Thanks girl!

• Beautiful Disaster

  (#) Geets 2007-05-11 02:21:49 PM

  aww, that was so adorable!!! loving the story, keep it up!!

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