Sissy and pissy.
(#) jerseygirlxx 2007-05-10 04:24:30 AMAhhh! Im the first one to review! And I think you just posted it too! I thought I was the only one who was up all night!
Anyway this was your best chapter so far! I mean that! I absolutely loved it! The dialog, the plot, how you blended what they were saying in with what they were doing! I loved it. I hate when its just straight dialog cause its like what are they just standing there talking! Ha! But this was great. I was kinda hoping Mikey would drink the chemicals in a way though I knew he wouldnt... It wasnt too cheesy either... very believable... now I took so long writing this I may not be first review anymore.
Author's responseoh wow thanks!! I think it's one of the greatest compliments I EVER received!. Mikey is a fucking sissy hahaha but that's why I like him so much.
Anyway, thanks a LOT for the review, it really means a lot to me when people take the time to read and comment on this story.
and just for the record, your review was the first :) I don't know why but some of the people that always reviewed don't do it anymore, hopefully they don't think the story is a complete shit now..but oh well you can't please everybody no matter how much you would like too..I'm happy you still like it!!!!
(#) zaberdeenz 2007-05-10 10:21:16 AMheyy,waves i just read like the whooole thingie from the veeery beginnin. and i hit myself for not noticing this before.
i liike this muchly.noddity-nod i love the way you write what they're saying, and add some of her thoughts in there. they're hilarious.smiles at the memory and its nice that its not alll about her&Gee now that they're together( i haaate when that happens), like i mean here you wrote about her and Mikey, which was cool. hopes that makes any sense ^___^ so yes, this is a good one. keep it comiiing, yes? ^____^
Author's responsei'll defenetly keep it coming.
i hate it too when the story becomes just about the girl and gee/ray/bob/frankie/mikey, so i try to throw different stuff in it to spice it up a bit.
hope you'll countinue to read and review me!!! huge wave
(#) Motherwar_13 2007-05-11 07:18:32 AMI love this chapter the fight with Mikey and the whole Chemical thing.... Great job
Author's responseo yay it's you again! i haven't seen you for a while her on the reviews page, was kinda worried you don't like the story anymore but i'm really pleased you're back and enjoying yourself again!