Things just won't get better
(#) whatkatydid 2007-05-10 11:12:27 PMYou know what, I sat here staring at the empty review box for ages and then i just thought, stuff it, just type so here I am, typing, amusing myself. I guess how I want praise you for this chapter is dealing with what I was talking to you about. I so totally enjoyed every single word of this chapter.
I really wanted to see Pete's committment to his relationship with Kayli come out and you did that really well. However, Kayli still doesn't trust him 100% and that induces that element of suspense into the writing, whether anything comes of it or not is a different matter but that imperfections in feelings is real and as humans, we're the most imperfect species ever.
You're a great writer Callan. Seriously.