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Part Nine: She's everything I'm not

by getup_n_go 2 Reviews

Things just won't get better

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: R - Genres: Drama, Romance - Characters:  - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2007/05/10 - Updated: 2007/05/11 - 1462 words

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  • I Need You by My Side

    (#) whatkatydid 2007-05-10 11:12:27 PM

    You know what, I sat here staring at the empty review box for ages and then i just thought, stuff it, just type so here I am, typing, amusing myself. I guess how I want praise you for this chapter is dealing with what I was talking to you about. I so totally enjoyed every single word of this chapter.

    I really wanted to see Pete's committment to his relationship with Kayli come out and you did that really well. However, Kayli still doesn't trust him 100% and that induces that element of suspense into the writing, whether anything comes of it or not is a different matter but that imperfections in feelings is real and as humans, we're the most imperfect species ever.

    You're a great writer Callan. Seriously.

    xxx
  • I Need You by My Side

    (#) patricksgirl84 2007-05-11 12:21:10 AM

    Loved it as usual. Can't wait for an update.

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