(#) mrsgerardway616 2007-05-11 04:48:21 PMthis is the best chapter yet.
there's no doubt ur the best writer in this website.
to let you know (and im not kissing up or anything) you are my idol for writing amazing stories and all that stuff.
you should write a book, and if you do, you know where to contact me
(#) Reign_Madden 2007-05-12 01:13:28 PMOk Dorothy, long time no review. I have missed your story and since Ficwad is being stupid and won’t let me review the chapters (server keeps locking me out) I figured I’d write one long ass review and post it. So here is what I have to say about alllllllllllllllll the chapters I missed while I was away. Ooooohh that reminded me I have something for you grins tell you about it later.
When you said that the talent show didn’t go as planned I imagined that her voice would crack mid-note and ruin the song and the performance. It was nice of Gee to help her out after all that’s what dad’s are supposed to do right?
Aww this chapter was so sweet, the fairy tale was lovely even when Monica interrupted and Gee had to reprimand her, I love their love. If only Gee could find someone like her for real instead of settling for BB…I know you know what I’m banging on about. Perfect chapter!
You better make him able to play, I know you’ve already written the chapter but I haven’t read it yet. This is your warning Missy.
Yay for Ray, who can still play the guitar, For s second I thought he might not be able to and then I’d have to come after you, I’ve read your past chapters I can take a leaf out of Jenn’s book and get you Mwahahaha. Oh yeah as for Ray snapping at Christa, he should be sorry, cause if I was her I would have smashed him upside his head with the case and put him right back to sleep lol. Hahaha the end of the May 5th chapter was funny. I’m glad Monica Veronica is home.
Now Sandee you know I love you but what drugs were you taking when you wrote the ‘Impossible Dream’ chapter? Seriously because I want some lol. That was the most twisted dream ever I loved it. You know I would shoot Frank too if he said he didn’t want the kids.
Liv? WTF? Don’t upset me SanDee I’m still jet lagged and can’t be held accountable for my actions. I need to read quicker, I’m glad I’ve been left behind now coz it’s not really a cliff hanger for me lol shame to everyone else who had to wait mwahahaha…sorry I have issues.
Ok I don’t know what Liv thinks she’s doing but I’m not falling for it she can shove her message up her ass…yeah I said it I said ass. I hope Ray doesn’t tell Gee, he doesn’t need that bullshit right now. I really like Christa btw, Oh yeah where’s baby way? Where’s Elena?
Noooooo OMG!! I’m in shock!! I must read on.
Damn you Miss Kansas that was hot but for the love of God what about Mikey and Alicia
Phew!!! All is good, poor Alicia poor Mikey. But they are ok. I hope their relationship doesn’t suffer from this. I hope that robbers penis get gangrene and cheesy and falls off.
My God am I tired! I’m glad I’ve caught up, I must leave you now and rate the chapters. Bye xxx