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Chapter Ten

by missbatcountry 2 Reviews

Gerard and Scarlet finally meet

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar, Frank Iero, Gerard Way, Mikey Way, Ray Toro - Published: 2007/05/14 - Updated: 2007/05/15 - 844 words

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  • Lipgloss Through My Veins

    (#) WynonaKing90 2007-05-14 07:10:39 PM

    "Yep, this is my big brother Gerard." Mikey said slipping a long slender arm around the slightly chubby man with long messy black hair and vacant bloodshot eyes that stood in front of Scarlet
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    i like how you described gerard realistically instead of all like, 'his body was amazing' even though everyone knows he really was chubby back in the day. lol.
    you made this story very real by describing him by how he actually was.
    nice job.
  • Lipgloss Through My Veins

    (#) clutsy_93 2007-05-15 05:18:01 AM

    awesome chapter,
    update soon :)
    loving this story alot

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