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Fast forward.

by darkviolet 3 Reviews

When time stops...

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: G - Genres: Humor, Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar, Frank Iero, Gerard Way, Mikey Way, Ray Toro - Published: 2007/05/22 - Updated: 2007/05/22 - 877 words - Complete


  • you can keep my brother

    (#) jerseygirlxx 2007-05-22 05:47:07 AM

    Sorry I havent been reviewing =(, Ive been writing and I cant write and read all at the same time it messes with my head! Any way Ive read the last few chapters and they were all good. Im still kinda confused on the age thing ( I mean why is Mikey living with them shouldnt he still be in high school?) Dosent matter!!! I mean this is fiction so things dont have to make sense! And your story is solid enough that Im willing to just go with it!! I also like how you go off on these random tangents about thigs that have nothing to do with Sky or G. Like the dog lady! That was so funny! ----xoxo

    Author's response

    i missed you reviews!! and i would really like to read something you you write on some fiction site or what? and i know i messed up the age factor so hugly, i planned gerard and bob to be older but then changed my mind and now it's icky (don't worry about me saying icky, i'm actually older than 5 :))
  • you can keep my brother

    (#) guitarz 2007-05-22 07:42:33 AM

    i think its cool you jumped ahead :)

    Author's response

    sweet! i was kinda worried people wouldn't like it, but it's only the summer that i skipped (hate the summer) so it's not so bad.
  • you can keep my brother

    (#) MCR_dynamite 2007-05-22 09:05:10 AM

    Lol, funny chapter! I don't mind, I think that it's good to skip somtimes and explain what happens rather than describe every little thing as it happens. Anyway, this story seriously rocks!!! -Jessie xox

    Author's response

    oh cool, i'm glad you think that. i was kind worried people would get upset about me skipping the summer, i just hate the summer and hate writing about it, but i won't leave empty patches in the story and explain what needs to be explained or important things that happened over the summer!

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