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The Burden of the Crown

by bikun 3 Reviews

Edgar reflects, Locke interrupts. Written for Brie, just because she asked.

Category: Final Fantasy 6 - Rating: R - Genres: Angst, Drama - Characters: Edgar, Locke - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2005/11/19 - Updated: 2005/11/19 - 1841 words - Complete

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  • The Burden of the Crown

    (#) DomaDoma 2006-02-09 12:53:37 PM

    I wasn't exactly expecting the slash there - you should have put up a warning - but you managed to make it believable within their characters, which is tough to do when one of them is Edgar. Congrats!

    Anyway, your insights into Edgar's mind were well-integrated into his character. Locke's too, obviously, but Edgar is done a lot less often and is probably more difficult. Good sketch!



    Author\'s Response: Thanks! (... You mean the "R" rating wasn't enough of a warning? After "Locke interrupts?")
  • The Burden of the Crown

    (#) lassarina 2006-07-22 11:28:53 AM

    I like the flowing dialogue you have between Edgar and Locke; it seems very in-character for both of them. Also, I like the way they both shy away from discussing anything too important.

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