A Sixth Year Story: Voldemort's Return brings in the International Confederation and a team from the North American Wizarding Confederation to take control. In this chapter, as the plans for the R...
(#) RedPhoenix_2k3 2007-05-25 06:52:10 PMOnce you got past all the backstory chapters and into telling Harry's story I really liked this story. That is until this latest chapter. I'll probably still continue to read but I must say that the whole Hermione pairing with someone old enough to be her father is off-putting to say the least. I'll admit that when you wrote about the breakup between her and Ron that you were leading toward the Luna/Harry/Hermione that appears in many of your stories. Oh well, I guess I can only try to not let this one part sour the rest of the fic.
- First Great saga with dynamic characters(Yours!) and a great plot line. But as I'm a fan of either Hermione or Luna being with Harry. Though Luna and Hermione are close here, Hermione going for an old dude here just doesn't sit right with me. Please understand I really like this story its just that Hermione here could do better either keeping close to Harry & Luna or maybe going with someone from the student body that can keep up with her! Maybe adding Charlie Weasley might work, but as this is a completed story I'll hold my thoughts til the end!