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Tripping Up Snape

The Final Battle is over. Harry has left Britain, leaving a devastated magical community, a lost Hermione, and a blinded Luna. Hermione becomes Professor McGonagall's apprentice while she cares f...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Drama, Romance - Characters: Harry, Hermione, Luna, Lupin, Professor McGonagall, Snape - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2007/05/26 - Updated: 2007/05/26 - 3637 words

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  (#) Nautilus 2007-05-26 06:17:14 AM

  brilliant, fitting chapter name, and i love luna... congrats

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  (#) Teresa 2007-05-26 06:57:11 AM

  Hmmm....I think that Snape deserves all he gets and more! Honestly, even if Harry wasn't there Snape would have been in for it; he'd have attacked Lune and/or Hermione and he'd have been fried at some point. My money would have been on McGonagall and/or Remus in paticular stomping on him, and if he'd gone after Luna Hermione would have fixed him in spades. Also, who knows, the castle itself might have decided to smack him down as well. Hermione and Luna are in a sense the daughters of their houses, just as Harry is the son of his. Chuckle....I do enjoy seeing Snape put into his place, he's such a pain! It was swet seeing Harry with his ladies after the party! I hope that he tells them everything soon! Thanks for the chapter!

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  (#) NAPPA 2007-05-26 07:51:28 AM

  If nothing else, it's an entertaining to read about the details of the hexing :)

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  (#) Jimm 2007-05-26 07:53:08 AM

  Good chapter, thanks for sharing it with us.

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  (#) Meteoricshipyards 2007-05-26 07:59:26 AM

  The clues continue; was he really been studying 15 years? I'm convinced now that he is Potter. Liked the Snape curse, and psychoanalysis.
  
  Good job.
  
  Tom A.

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  (#) Cateagle 2007-05-26 10:00:15 AM

  "Have a ncie trip, Severus?" I can see this is going to be a most "interesting" year for both Severus Snape and Minerva McGonagall, for the same reasons but with different responses. I thought the description of how Tom had hexed the DADA position wsa quite interesting and plausible.
  
  wicked chuckle I can't wait to see what bit of ridicule hits Snape next.

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  (#) Wolfric 2007-05-26 12:30:44 PM

  I always like to see Snape reap a bit, or a lot, of what he has sewn. I am enjoying your story. I imagine that there is a lot of back story that we may eventually discover. Thanks for writing. W.

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  (#) DavidMPotter 2007-05-26 02:17:13 PM

  I can't wait until Z beds Luna and Hermoine

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  (#) matthiasblack 2007-05-26 06:52:50 PM

  Again DrT you amaze me. I find my self refreshing ficwad to see if you updated as soon as I would like you to. This fic is starting off really well and shows many ideas I have not seen in HP fanfiction like your take on the DADA curse. I wonder if Brother Z will show Hermione and Luna some sex magic later. Thanks again for writing another amazing fic and I hope to see more.

  Author's response

  Nope, no porn in this fic, sorry. All sex off-stage. It has the rating it has due to crass humor, as Z abuses Snape, and the asides on what happened during the last days of the war (to warn the squeemish).
  
  "T"

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  (#) Toto 2007-05-27 01:37:08 AM

  Really excellent characterisation, and a nice sense of humor too in this fic. My only complaint is how quick hermioen and luna are to do some of the things zee asked them to do, with no checking of his intentions....

  Author's response

  'Z' projects an aura of serenity to all (although that would merely irritate Snape), and of course Hermione and Luna instinctually trust him, even if they (esp. Hermione) do not realize who he was.
  
  "T"

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