A change from the normal?
(#) Gangsta_Girl 2007-06-02 12:06:20 PMI kinda wish you would've said "Brendon's P.O.V." at the top. I was reading for a half a second and was like WTF. Then I realized that the P.O.V. had changed. LMAO. But AMAZING! I Looove the way you write him. The inner-conflicts were dead on and the backdrop of him speeding was really great. I really liked it! I love this story! I love ya Geets! Yay! Can't wait for more!!!!
Author's responselmao, well, i did that for a reason :D i wanted to confuse people and make it less obvious! lol. "mission accomplished" :P thankyou, so much! yay, u liked the way i wrote him? happy dances love you! thanks. sincurrrly mine? hmm... Geets xx
(#) rainbowsprinkles08 2007-06-02 12:23:51 PMOh dear god. My heart. I think i jsut died. Thank you for killing me lols. Yeah....ok good writing, but seriosuly please, you need to let bden b ok bc vicky and brendon need to be together.
Author's responseaww, im sorry! i didnt mean to kill anyone! wow, i feel bad now... thankyou for the review though!
- Oh. my. god. That was amazing. I love the fact that you re-wrote this chapter, kinda, in Brendon's POV. (Because the last chapter was kinda in Vicky's POV...)
When I first heard Brendon was in a car crash, I was like, well that's kind of cliched, but after reading THIS chapter, it made me feel a whole lot better, because not many people go ahead and DESCRIBE what happened during the car crash, or more like, HOW it happened. I like how fast-paced it was towards the end; I just wanted to read it all so I knew what happened! (Even though I already KNEW what was gonna happen!!)
And that's when you know that the author's a really awesome writer.
They make you want to read it, and leave you hanging on the edge of your seat, even though you know the ending.
Good job, Geets!
Author's responsewow, omg... thanks! GAH! wow. u really think im awesome?! dude... u had me a little scared when u said that it might be cliched, but that is just so taken over with happiness now! thankyou :D Geets xxx