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Gerard misses Frank.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: R - Genres: Drama - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2007/06/02 - Updated: 2007/10/09 - 458 words - Complete

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  (#) jerseygirlxx 2007-06-02 05:41:04 PM

  This was kinda like your other story the "i remember one'; I like the repetiviness again. This one was more anger filled I guess. they way he kept saying fuck I miss over and over again. Okay maybe not angerish but regretfulish? anger at himself for letting Frank go? I dont get the feeling Frank is dead cause theres no sadness- not death sadness atleast... If you wanna expand it Id fill it out a little. add why hes so angry/remorseful or whatever towards Frank... Tack it onto the end of a paragraph - imiss blah blah and now hes with her... Or you know what would be really sweet! if you add a line at the end like -Fuck...I wonder if he misses me...
  
  Anyway... as for your parents the only thing I can suggest which may sound stupid but uh- have you told them you write fan fics? youre really good and I dont think your parents would want to limit your creativity. As for ideas.. I think that you write really well one-shots. (crossover is where you bring in other characs. in your story- that really do exist- ususally on here its uh fall out boy for some reason. (mmm pete) anyway um thats a mcr/fall out boy crossover.) But for inspiration I would say listen to song a few time and focus on what the emotion is and then apply it to the story. Youre a good writer and I hope you post more. ----xoxo

  Author's response

  Yay i love it when you review its so helpful!
  
  okay, ill remember the elaboration tip for next time, thanks!
  
  As for my folks, they know i write fanfiction, but not exactly what i write it about. They did before SORT OF because my teachers called them, but they dont exactly know everything.
  
  

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  (#) shelbyXsue_icide 2007-06-02 06:29:34 PM

  aw. that was so cute.

  Author's response

  THANKIES!

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  (#) lups 2007-06-02 09:55:25 PM

  where is Frankie? anyways, i love the repetitiveness... i do that a lot in my stories. i like your stories, but i suck major ass at writting vampirey ones :S i hope you update your story soon =]
  
  me

  Author's response

  i will as soon as i type at least 5 more chapters, so it might take a while, so sorry! i just need to get caught up on the typing a bit... yup, thanks for reading!

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  (#) MCR_dynamite 2007-10-05 08:08:05 AM

  I thought I reviewed this ages ago, last time I read it!!!!
  
  Anyway:
  
  That story was kinda sweet in a way! How he explained the fluffy memories and it was sad about the "I miss" thing! :( It was awesome!!!
  
  Anyway, I just thought I'd tell you again that you rock at being an author! And I, honest and truly, would buy anything that you published!

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  (#) frankiiee 2007-10-05 08:13:51 PM

  ADOREABLE! =]

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  (#) xImRadx 2007-11-14 05:42:50 PM

  Aww thats fucking adorable... I absolutly LOVE the way you write. So why does he miss him? Where did he go? Authors reply please? Or you could just send me another lovely email haha.

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  (#) Emo_musik_chick 2009-01-20 06:46:47 AM

  Aww!
  That was adorable. I've finally found someone whose entire profile is nothing but Frerard xDD I've got lots of reading to do- and good ratings to be awarded-, let's just say that =D
  
  I would, however, love to know where Frankie was...you could maybe do a second chapter from Frank's point of view, talking about the exact same thing. You know, how he misses Gee. I dunno, that just seems like it'd be cute to me, bringing it full-circle...
  
  But either way, that was lovely.
  Exx-oh, Albi

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