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Kisses By The Lake

Rachel is at Mikey and Gerard's doing some homework. things are said. Gerard and Rachel go to the lake, and something happens that forces them to avoid each other....

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: R - Genres: Drama, Romance - Characters: Frank Iero, Gerard Way, Mikey Way, Ray Toro - Warnings: [?] - Published: 2007/06/06 - Updated: 2007/06/07 - 3391 words - Complete

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• A Friendship To Last A Lifetime

  (#) jerseygirlxx 2007-06-06 07:13:10 PM

  This is a really good story! Youre not getting any reviews cause its hard to read. You need spaces between paragraphs. And some of the dialog is hard to follow since it dosent say he said/she said. maybe break it up a litte with actions and spacing. If you need help with it send me an email through the link thing and I'll show you more specifically. Otherwise. Its a great story line. I hope you keep working on it!----xoxo

• A Friendship To Last A Lifetime

  (#) MySweetRomance 2007-06-09 01:30:04 AM

  Me loves this story!
  
  No problem ^_^
  
  Keep going! :-) xx

• A Friendship To Last A Lifetime

  (#) clutsy_93 2007-06-21 04:55:37 PM

  omg, I can't beleive she ran :(
  oh well very sneeky at the end where she leaves :)

• A Friendship To Last A Lifetime

  (#) Keira 2007-07-07 04:59:11 PM

  i love this story!! i keep coming back everyday to read it!! update update update!!

• A Friendship To Last A Lifetime

  (#) Keira 2007-07-07 05:03:37 PM

  um, i don't get that thing in chapter 6 when he goes to the bathroom as soon as they finish fighting, someone explain, please!! :(

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