Trust can be a hard thing to gain, and even harder to keep, but sometimes it is worth the continuing struggle
- Oh wow, this is definitely the best Theresa//Archie story out there. I really like the looks into their minds with the bolded consciences, its a nice perspective. I do think, however, that you need a bit more negative insight on their 'relationship' from Jay and Atlanta. Not to show them as bad guys, but to give us more of a reason to want them to be toghether, ya know? Convert the non believers!
Anyways, great job, great story, and from now on I'll review every chap.
(#) iheartyou07 2007-07-04 11:02:36 AMHOORAAHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
AND HAPPY [belated!!] CANADA DAY! ♥
Hell yeah. Now that was a chapter you know I read more than once =] I love how Theresa went over and got into his "bed". I love the fact that they're getting so touchy-touchy. hehehe. Oh god, I love this whole thing. But I want more Jay Jealous Timeee. lol. And more AT moments. But you will never have enough, because I'm just that greeddyy:D I can't wait until they finish school and their summer starts... ooh, summer arrangments. I know you've already got a twist planned for that, and i can't wait. they're going to be living together:D yayyy. But what do her dreams mean? I'm sure I'll find out soon enough though, lol. ahh, seems like Atlanta's already got everything figured out... oo, maybe Archie&Jay should talk before the whole moving in thing. and then they argue. and then Archie hits Jay with a really good comeback//comment. heheh, and Jay feels like he's just been bitchslapped. hahah, that's just me and my little AT fantasyy. ignore me =] but not my more AT moments comment. you can't ignore that. ever.♥ yyeah, i'm done.
but Jen, before I start to blabber [as though I haven't already:D], I will leave you with the usual i-hate-you-and-your-stupid-talent-but-plleeasseee-keep-writing-for-us-because-we-love-you-anyways, and hopefully you'll update soon!
P.S. AT MOMENTS!
P.P.P.S. ^more AT MOMENTS!!
P.P.S. I swear I'm done this time. ♥