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Fear Of Falling
(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-12-26
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Why?
WHY DID YOU DO THIS TO ME?!
You have completely taken my breath away! WHAT ARE MY LUNGS GONNA DO NOW?!
Sheesh. Silly writers with their amazing talents that express such beauty in first chapters such as this one right here. GOSH.
Also, I happen to be slightly jealous. This work here is AMAZING. Curses! Why am I not blessed with such grace with a pen? [Or keyboard, in this case]
Heh heh. If my friends read that, they'd eat me. I'm not good when it comes to this foreign thing called 'confidence'
Eh...
But, this review isn't about me or my insecurity. It's about how yes, intriguing and lovely I think your writing is.
Although, this is just the first chapter... But I assure you that I will be anticipating future chapters to come. Lol, I sound creepy, don't I?
Oh well. I just wanted to share with you that I enjoy what I've read and will continue on with the next chapter, hoping that there will be more to read.
Annnnnd, since I don't come here much anymore due to an abundance of illiterate newbs [I assure you that you do NOT fall under that category. If you did, I don't think I would've written such a complimentory review] and a fateful mistake upon deleting a one-shot that happened to be my favorite and I punished myself, I will place this under my alerts or whatever. :]
YAY! Off to read the next chapter.
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