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another day!

kassandra and gerard discover something about themselves!

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: R - Genres: Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar, Frank Iero, Gerard Way, Mikey Way, Ray Toro - Published: 2007/06/19 - Updated: 2007/06/19 - 1823 words

Reviews

• YOU make me feel so good when your inside me!

  (#) jerseygirlxx 2007-06-19 06:54:08 PM

  Wow. Im kinda torn on this. I read the reivews and the story and unless I missed a chap or two there has been no sex (yet atleast). I totally get that its a made up story and all. I do agree the age thing is disturbing. But I would like to point out there is another story on here someone wrote Im not sure who about a girl who sleeps with her science teacher (Gerard) and there are noooo negative comments on that one. And I beleive the ages are the same... I'll have to go back and check. But anyway I do think the whole story line is extremely far-fetched. Yeah the grammer is bad a times and theres quite a few typos. Ive seen worse though. If you are going to keep posting you really need to- like the previous poster said - be able to take the critisim. Espc. when you put a controversial story line like this. ----xoxo

  Author's response

  I think I read that story

• YOU make me feel so good when your inside me!

  (#) cutegirl12356 2007-06-19 07:43:00 PM

  OMG.....MORE!

  Author's response

  thank you 4 not saying that you hate it

• YOU make me feel so good when your inside me!

  (#) WynonaKing90 2007-06-19 11:19:42 PM

  lol.
  i likey your story so UPDATE.

  Author's response

  thank you
  you make me feel much better!

• YOU make me feel so good when your inside me!

  (#) KC 2007-06-20 03:52:10 PM

  Quick question- you said this girl's eight-year-old sister is in a band????? Very, very far-fetched, if you ask me. I know you've probably heard all this stuff before though. But if you want to keep posting, just KEEP POSTING! You don't have to beg for people's permission, especially since they're not exactly going to give it willingly.

  Author's response

  thanks for encourging me!
  

• YOU make me feel so good when your inside me!

  (#) clutsy_93 2007-06-20 04:01:01 PM

  aww thank you for telling people about my stories very nice :D, please update again loving this story alot

  Author's response

  no promblem thier really good everyone should know!

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