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He; You

Frerard in mind; no names mentioned. Poem/fic type thing.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG - Genres: Romance - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way - Published: 2007/06/20 - Updated: 2007/10/04 - 63 words - Complete

Reviews

• He; You

  (#) MCR_dynamite 2007-06-20 01:21:58 PM

  Wow is all I can say! Which one's which? I loved it! It was short and not-sweet! Lol! I seriously love your writing and this was no acception!!!
  
  IT ROCKED!!! -Jessie xox

• He; You

  (#) jerseygirlxx 2007-06-20 01:57:29 PM

  I liked how you used the bold font to empahsis certain words. but I dont get why the fourth one is SHEETS? and OBJECT? I mean sheets is a noun. All the other bold words are adverbs? adjectives? I dont F'ing know. I told you Im not a techincal person but something seems funky there. I would boldface 'pushes'.It seems to blend better with the other words. But overall very very good!!! You should consider posting some of your more poetic stuff in the poetry catagory. You may get more helpful feedback there!----xoxo

  Author's response

  oh, yeah i made a mistake, i THINK i meant to bold that lol. ill change it ur right! =)
  
  thank you!

• He; You

  (#) wtfwhore 2007-06-23 12:14:54 AM

  awesome.
  why r u so amazing?

• He; You

  (#) pixiedust09 2008-04-28 01:17:12 PM

  wow thats really good!!!...... damn you, i wanna be able the write like that! pout

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