(#) halfbreedassassin85 2006-08-29Yeah, your story is great and til about ohhh... say the last 4 paragraphs of the story where Izayoi gets I mean come on rape for an ending. Have someone getting raped in the middle or something, but for the end kill someone off or make it sad or happy ending or whatever, but not rape, unless you continue the story a chapter or two more then its fine...... Still I give the whole story 9.8/10 (the ending could of been better)
- ummmmm ya whats up with the ninth and tenth scroll? for some weird reason i cant see them but i love your story so far, feel free to check out mine
Author's responseI will check to see what's wrong. I have the feeling when they updated the site, it messed up my fics. Thanks for letting me know there was a problem.
I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.
(#) demon_kitty2008 2008-08-05I thought your story was absolutely amazing. Its just at the end, it kinda leaves you hanging. But still its was written beautifully. kudos1
Author's responselaughs taht's because it's not finished yet. Unfortunately that oen has been very slow going when it comes to writing the chaopters. ^^; Still, I'm very you enjoyed it so far. :D
(#) demon_kitty2008 2008-08-07Yay! I can't wait till' its done! Looking forward to it!!! ^___^
Author's responseXD Well, I am going away & trying to finish some other fics at the moment, but I think I will print out what I ahd started & bring a notebook with me. :D With a bit of luck, you won;'t have to wait too long. :D
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